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Tuesday, 30 August 2016

Hauora four walls


Today I have been working on canva DLO on the four walls of hauora. Canva was tricky for me but I tried my best to complete my DLO on hauora.

Guard for a day

Guard for a Day
1. When was A428 built?
In 1909
2. What took over from steam trains and when?
Diesel engines took over the New Zealand railway in the 1970’s
3. Why did these type of trains take over?
Because these diesel engines are more powerful even they can pull a longer and heavier loads
4. What happened to A428?
The old A428 was rescued and restored. Now the A428 carries tourists twice a week through the Weka pass in Canterbury
5. Why do you think Kristina helps on the train?
Because her Grandpa works as the guard on the old Weka pass express

Friday, 26 August 2016

Hauora


General knowledge on Hungary

Poetry



L.I To use a range of vocabulary to create a picture in the reader's head.

This week for Writing we did our lesson as a whole class instead of doing it in our groups. For writing we worked on writing a Poetry using Nouns, Verbs, Adjectives and Adverbs. For our writing session we were divided into groups of four and had to cooperate with each other in our groups the meanings for a Noun, Verb, Adjective and a Adverb. After that in our groups we had to write down 2 examples of a Noun , Verb , Adjective and Adverb. Soon we wrote a Poetry together in our groups using the Noun, Verb, Adjective and Adverb words we wrote down. Our writing Must Do Task was to write a Poetry by our selves using the same process we used in our groups. I learnt that a adjective is a word that describes a noun or pronoun. I was very struggling on picking words that will fit my poem to make it good. I think for next time I should find more catching and better words.

Thursday, 25 August 2016

Woriors visit



Today we went into the hall for a special visit with the warriors. One man was named Ryan Hoffman and the other John Polavi. They let us play spin the wheel and the four quizzes we played Trivia time, Sleeping, Hydration and Belonging. 

Wednesday, 24 August 2016

Rugby with a Jandal

Rugby with a jandal
1. Where is the village that the family lives?
A small village in samoa
2. Do they always play with a jandal?
Sometimes they played with a jandal
3. What other things did they try to play with?
A coconut but it was too heavy and hard
4. Why were the rainy days the best days?
Because the field becomes a sea of mud
5. Why was Fiti afraid to play rugby in New Zealand?
Because he misses his hoe and has never been in new zealand
6. Why do you think no one believes Fiti about playing rugby with a jandal?

Because none of the new zealand kids play with a jandal like Fiti

Advert evaluation on vodafone


Name of product
Vodafone
Who do you think the intended buyer is?
Someone who doesn’t have a phone.
Someone that want’s to save a something important.
What kind of advert is it?

TV                           Radio                  Magazine           Poster
How do they try to persuade you to buy it?
Tick:

With pictures      

With words        

With music

With questions

With jokes

With catchphrases

With jingles

Other: ____________________
__________________________
Do you think it is a good advert?

           Yes          No


Why?
Vodafone has a good product, they can have any phone and have the best computers.
Would you buy the product?     Yes                      No

Why?
If someone needs a phone like me I would get a phone or even get a Vodafone computer


Do you think the advert is honest?  Yes                      No

Why? Their product can be faster and still the best company

What words do they use to sell the product?
Now even faster in liverpool.

Basic subtraction level 5

Today I was playing transum basic subtraction to understand my subtractions signs for today.

Friday, 19 August 2016

Main idea summary frame

MAIN IDEA SUMMARY FRAME

The main idea of the text is  struggling Rugby seven at the 2016 olympic games, for New Zealand.

One example of supporting detail is the New zealand Men’s and women’s teams are the current World champions of Seven and have dominated their respective competitions

Another example of supporting detail is The New Zealand Women’s Sevens team qualified for the Rio Games by reaching the top four during the 2014/15 women’s seven series

Finally it is clear the main idea is New zealand Olympic Rugby sevens team

Because Everything in the text talks about the Rugby sevens and the New zealand team
Today me, Joshua w and Aung naing have made a summary frame on the Rugby sevens.

Transum basic addition work out on level 4



Today me and Joshua w have created a google presentation on basic addition.

Thursday, 18 August 2016

Advert evaluation on Subway sandwiches



Name of product
Subway sandwiches
Who do you think the intended buyer is?
Someone that is hungry
What kind of advert is it?


TV                           Radio                  Magazine           Poster
How do they try to persuade you to buy it?
Tick:


With pictures      

With words        


With music


With questions

With jokes


With catchphrases

With jingles

Other: ____________________
__________________________
Do you think it is a good advert?

           Yes          No


Why? If some people are hungry then you can have a nice and delicious sandwich which you won’t even get hungry. They can have any kind of sandwich and can cook your sandwich that will taste so good for you
Would you buy the product?     Yes                      No

Why? Hey have a delicious products and they can have a good taste which will be so good
Do you think the advert is honest?  Yes                      No

Why? They will sell their sandwiches cheap and fresh

What words do they use to sell the product?
That there their new yummy nachos are 89 cents and their
sandwiches are even cheap.
Today I have been working on an advert evaluation on subway sandwiches.

Monday, 15 August 2016

Transum basic addition Level 5


Today I have been learning about basic addition for today. This quiz was tricky for me but I got them all correct.

Transum basic addition Level 4


Today I have been learning on my basic addition for today. his quiz was easy for me but some of the answers correct.

Thursday, 11 August 2016

Analysing an advertisement on Olympus

Analysing a Print Advertisement:
What product or service is being advertised?

Being in the wild

Who might be interested in the product or service? Who is it trying to attract? Young people? Old people? Male? Female?

Just a male

Is there a catchy phrase or slogan for the product? If so, what is it?

There is no catch phrase to this photo

What message is the advertisement trying to say about the product?

Olympus

How does the language or image used grab the reader’s attention?

A koala on a man’s face, No one has had a koala on their face before, That is just ridiculous

How may the advertisement make the user feel?

Makes you want to go into the forest and explore lots of animals. This one is really funny


olympus.jpg

analysing an advertisement on Mcdonalds

Analysing a Print Advertisement:
What product or service is being advertised?
Milkshake


Who might be interested in the product or service? Who is it trying to attract? Young people? Old people? Male? Female?


People who love milkshakes


Is there a catchy phrase or slogan for the product? If so, what is it?


Yes- I’m lovin it

What message is the advertisement trying to say about the product?


Their product is fresh. Is like it came straight out of the cow.

How does the language or image used grab the reader’s attention?


The cows on the tramp, because we haven’t seen a cow on a tramp. It is very unusual


How may the advertisement make the user feel?
Makes you want to go and get the milkshake. It was funny.

macdonalds.jpg

Analysing an advertisement for bose

Analysing a Print Advertisement:
What product or service is being advertised?


Who might be interested in the product or service? Who is it trying to attract? Young people? Old people? Male? Female?


A Male


Is there a catchy phrase or slogan for the product? If so, what is it?


Bose noise reaching


What message is the advertisement trying to say about the product?


Bose


How does the language or image used grab the reader’s attention?


A man in a boat about to go over a waterfall, No one has ever done that before, That is just so funny


How may the advertisement make the user feel?


It makes you want to go for a ride in a boat.

bose_3.jpg


Rocket ship



Today Me, Joshua w and Jericho have been playing the place values Rocket ship.

Friday, 5 August 2016

Analysing a print advertisement on Fedex

Analysing a Print Advertisement:
What product or service is being advertised?

Delivering Packages

Who might be interested in the product or service? Who is it trying to attract? Young people? Old people?

Everyone will have new stuff

Is there a catchy phrase or slogan for the product? If so, what is it?

There's no catchy phrase or slogan for this product

What message is the advertisement trying to say about the product?

Their product can ship any shape, Size and can take anything.

How does the language or image used grab the reader’s attention?

A trumpet in a small box, That can’t even fit in there, That is ridiculous

How may the advertisement make the user feel?


fedex.jpg

Thursday, 4 August 2016

What's the big idea

What’s the Big Idea?

WHO: Mr Ebbesmeyer

WHAT: No less than 29,000 plastic bath toys.


WHERE:  Titanic sank, Hawaii and frozen in an Arctic ice pack.


WHY:  Because the storm was so strong that is storm can blow away lots of things.


WHEN:   January 1992.


HOW:  a stupendous storm washed three containers off a ship
Today I am learning to recreate the story in a text

Wednesday, 3 August 2016

Tuesday, 2 August 2016

aincient and modern olympics



Today we have been learning about the ancient and modern olympics. Me and Calvin have been working hard and have finally got our work all done. The one that I like most was the last slide which is what the winners receive.